Sample Scene 1 Feedback

This is our sample scene 1 which we showed to a group of our target audience in class which we then noted down feedback.




Editing Feedback:
With our editing the feedback we received was positive as they thought the layering of the clips worked well and achieved verisimilitude, and they complimented the black and white tint we used as it works well with the track. Therefore we're planning on keeping the black and white tint for our final piece and  the layering techniques.

Mise-en-scene Feedback:
Our target audience thought that the mise-en-scene worked well with the natural rural setting, and the costume also was very unique and they preferred this rather than a stereotypical costume for the main character.

Set-up Feedback:
However, they thought that with the set-up we could have chosen a spot that was more isolated, and that all the chairs should be facing one chair in the centre of the frame.

Continuity Feedback:
They also commented on the discontinuity within this section because in the background there's birds flying into one scene and not in the others, also the movements are different in some of the scenes which doesn't look as good.

This is our first piece of audience feedback we got from our sample sequence one. Our feedback was from our target audience which is good as we could get ideas from our peers as well as them being our target audience. This was the edit that I did with the layering of our main character sitting in his chair. In the final cut pour character will be lip syncing in these performance shots.